Wow. I mean... Wow. I've been skipping lemons or at best reading them like any other scene for the last two years; read so many that they just didn't have any impact anymore.

This one did. Wowza. The description of the act hovered between really crude and borderline unnecessary crude, but then with the theme and the tension of the whole fic, that was exactly the kind of description it needed. The whole fic was awesome, did a great job showing James' feelings and painting a dark picture of how much their little world was fucked up. Especially without anyone knowing, mein gott, wow.

And the end. Brr. *shiverpurrs* Thank you for writing it, it was an awesome read.