First, I'm so sorry for not commenting earlier! I saw this yesterday but just didn't have time, but I do now. :)
If it's anatomically possible, Ron's eyes narrow even further.
Ahaha! I lol'd so much at that, it's just perfect - had me right in the scene, and very funny. :)
I was going to quote all the parts I especially liked but all the parts I especially liked are THE WHOLE THING. When I saw this post with my name on it I was rather excited and then saw Here is humour, a dash of gen, and frottage! and then went all A"LSdkfjslfdj s in a good way b/c that's exactly what I wished for, and mystery author? You definitely delivered! XD
It's just such a story, and by that unhelpful statement I mean that it felt just like canon might, where there are romantic aspects but also like, THE STORY, you know? I loved that, and the interaction between the characters? It was so on, just exactly there. I really enjoyed the characterizations, they felt genuine and made sense and just worked so well both in relation to the plot and in relation to the other characters.
The smut was wonderful, but I have to say it's so totally more than "just smut", like, it was honestly well done IMO. It wasn't tacky or ridiculous or anything like that, it was good, and I think you deserve lots of credit for that, b/c it can be hard to write adult content (for lack of better term) that isn't too sappy or too ridiculous or such. To have it be believable but not boring, and I just felt you handled it so well.
Lastly, your style of writing, I really loved it, it was just so readable and well paced and I feel like I've hit the jackpot with this gift b/c it's so well balanced - it's not too little info or too much, you've included humour and plot and characterization and sex and just so much without having one of those elements over power the others.
Basically? THANK YOU! :D I love this, and can't wait for the reveals. :)