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Qurinas ([info]qurinas) wrote in [info]hp_yule_balls,
Oooooooh. That was great! I saw this a couple days ago and couldn't wait to get abck to it to read. Even with the anticipation, it was great!!

So very hot and I loved the insight into Ginny and the way you wrote Pansy.

Fav line: Pansy leaned forward and kissed her. It was the kind of kiss Ginny would have never shared with Harry. It was too filthy, too sloppy, and far too hot. They slipped their tongues into each other's mouths without care, they grazed teeth across each other's lips. Ginny took Pansy's bottom lip in her mouth and sucked. Pansy licked a path across Ginny's jaw.

Ok, more than one line, but whatever. ;)

Great job!



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