Gosh. I'm lost for words. But that was quite possibly one of the hottest things I've read! Wow! Just. Wow.
You have a great grasp of Draco's voice, it was a joy to read his thoughts in your words. But it's the imagery that really knocked me dead. Or... erm... yeah. I think you get the drift ;-) Lovely pictures.
All the characters are wonderfully characterised, too. I can vividly imagine the entire thing. This was really a great read!