I'm totally in love with your story. The subtle fight for dominance, the imperfect sex, Wilde ... brilliant! I love the way you portrait Aberforth and Ariana, the goat and the strawberries. I love your young Albus, how he tries to deal with his situation and can only fail.

He was beautiful as a classical statue, if classical statues posed mockingly like girls on the music-hall stage.
What a fantastic image!

An absolutely wonderful story!