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springsmutfairy (springsmutfairy) wrote in hp_springsmut,
@ 2009-03-01 15:56:00

Entry tags:

albus severus/snape, fic, slash, snape/harry

Happy Springsmut, cnary_crem_dght!
Author: joanwilder
Recipient: cnary_crem_dght
Title: Fallen Far From the Tree
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Albus Severus/Snape, Harry/Snape
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic/Warner Brothers, Inc. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Caught between two generations of Potters—literally—Snape discovers that his namesake is cut from a different cloth than his father.
Warnings: Infidelity, bondage, non-con
Word Count: ~19,000
Author's Notes: There is no chan in this story. There is, however, per my recipient's request, post-war Headmaster Snape. I'll leave it up to you to decide if he's pervy; I do think he's ugly. Thank you, J., for beta reading. And snogs to the Mods for giving us a reason to smut in the spring.

( Fallen Far From The Tree )

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	torino10154 2009-03-01 05:03 pm UTC (link)
	This really breaks my heart. Not a one of them is unscathed-certainly Snape isn't the only ugly one here, although I feel most for Harry actually, even though his cheating is what started it all. Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:38 am UTC (link)
	Yeah, Harry did start it all, although as they say, it takes two to tango. None of them unscathed, you're right. Albus Severus, though, had a character flaw that I believe would've asserted itself eventually, perhaps not as dramatically as I portrayed here, but 'the bad will have out.' Thanks for reading and for letting me know you did. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	svartalfur 2009-03-01 05:06 pm UTC (link)
	Your Snape is perfect. His revenge so absolutely perfect. I love how everyone is flawed in your story. Awesome job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:39 am UTC (link)
	Thanks, Anders. Perfect Snape is high praise indeed. And they certainly were all flawed, none of them innocent. I'm so pleased you read, and as always, it's great to hear from you. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	snarry_fan7 2009-03-02 09:26 am UTC (link)
	Wow...amazing work! Snape was so perfectly in-character, Albus Severus was definitely a devious (unsuccessful) little shit, and Harry was great too. I also feel the most for Harry in this case. Well done!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:40 am UTC (link)
	Snape and Albus Severus certainly showed their Slytherin sides, but Harry set it all in motion, I think. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks so much for taking the time to let me know. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	centaury_squill 2009-03-02 01:56 pm UTC (link)
	Albus Severus is in for quite the learning experience over the next couple of years. Serve him right for messing with the über-Slytherin. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:42 am UTC (link)
	Uber-Slytherin--hee! Yeah, I wonder what he was thinking? Ah, the folly of youth, probably. But now he'll be older and wiser and...subdued, at least for a while. Thanks so much for reading and commenting--it's appreciated. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	zalil_z 2009-03-05 02:55 am UTC (link)
	Oh dear, I never thought a cross-2gen pairing could work that well! I loved how cunning Al thought himself to be and how Severus put him in his place. Awesome job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:43 am UTC (link)
	I've only read a handful fics with Harry's children in them, so this take on Albus Severus made sense to me, as well as Snape digging in his heels to hold on to Harry. I'm glad it worked for you, and thanks for letting me know. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	spazlady2002 2009-03-05 09:44 pm UTC (link)
	................I am speechless..........WOW.........Damn that was damn good. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:44 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! I'm pleased you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	foliageink 2009-03-05 09:56 pm UTC (link)
	OMG, what a story. I had so much I have to do tonight but once I start the first sentence I couldn't stop, I didn't even want to blink. I absolutely LOVE this Snape, asking more than double for the payback. The ultimate Slytherin at work. Doesn't get any better than this! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-04-11 01:46 am UTC (link)
	Awww, thanks so much! I had great fun writing a darker Snape here--not my usual, but it felt felt good. He's one character who I think would have an eye-for-an-eye mentality, when provoked. I appreciate that you read and commented. (Reply to this) (Parent)

salvadora
2009-03-06 05:28 pm UTC (link)

you had me from "admiring three generations of Potter arses," which, by the way, possibly best opening to a story ever.

This was just completely great. I know that doesn't give much to go on in terms of your pornfessional development, but it was. Great. I found myself wondering way too much at the end how on earth it was going to pan out over the next two years, with my inner "Snape can't be so mean to take it out on the kid for THAT long" kicking in and imagining some dreadful, stupid heartwrenching scene where Snape admits how just bone-crushingly disappointed he was that his protege turned out to be a stoopid-head in the revenge/general Slytherin activities department. And then they all got along and bought roses, the end.

Sigh. Your version's MUCH better.

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joanwilder
2009-04-23 07:37 pm UTC (link)

Hehe, glad you liked that line. I could almost hear Snape saying it in my head.

I don't think Snape will repent, or feel sorry for his namesake. I think he's fond enough of Harry, and determined that a great potions talent not go to waste, that he'd persist in 'teaching his lesson' to the very end. So, yeah, my version. :)

Thanks so much for reading, and for your thoughtful comment.

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	snarry_reader 2009-05-09 01:39 am UTC (link)
	Just a quick comment to let you know that we've added this story to the snarry_reader on our Master List here, and in the Dark and Twisted post here. If you'd like us to make any changes to the link, please let us know. Thanks, Gaycrow, on behalf of the Reader. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-05-09 02:47 am UTC (link)
	I'm so honored to be on the Dark and Twisted list! Thanks, gaycrow! (Reply to this) (Parent)