This is beautiful. You made me believe them, completely. The image of their first kiss is exceptionally gorgeous, and i love the clothes you've put them in - Marcus' cravat, the long coats - boots and gloves. I could look at it forever. I love the delight Ginny shows from start to finish, and I can imagine Hermione getting more and more frustrated as Ginny thinks, 'They'll never forgive me for leaving Harry, so I'll do what I like'. The last image of Marcus' arm protectively over Ginny's legs was a gorgeous ending. Brilliant work!