Wow. This is very intense. I have very little time today and just managed to read a bit over half, so, partial comment....
I so appreciate that you weave in the contracdictions and inherent hypocrisy of war.
Oh, the Snape bit was a nice touch. As was the scene with Amargo--poignant and also funny.
My favorite parts so far were the conversations between Moody and Scrimgeour, I think particularly the way they so casually decide to go out for a drink after such traumatic events. They seem to stay grounded through their moments together.
I have to go, but I will be back later for the rest and a proper comment! Thank you!