Oh, wow. This is intense, and wonderful. I love the little details of Muggle life and the wonderfully natural, by turns loving and disinterested relationship between mother and son. Everything you do here conveys the grey monotony of Eileen's life wonderfully, the way she is accustomed to just letting things happen and abiding by the rules of the life she's chosen, and how that makes everything fall apart in the end. Just wow. Amazing.