I thought I'd check this out because the pairing was so intriguing and I got sucked in immediately. Wow, what a wonderful read! I absolutely loved your style. Gorgeous. And it felt maybe familiar? Gah, I don't know! :)
I loved that the story was centred around Draco, and your Draco, his character development, was wonderful. I loved Rita too, all the little bits about her character and backstory you gave us (and Draco), and how you kept things ambiguous about her and her motives. And the ending! I loved how you ended the story on a melancholic yet very hopeful note. And the imagery throughout, your descriptions were so vivid and just beautiful. Wonderful, wonderful story!