I normally don't enjoy Draco fics, and I am not a huge fan of Rita. I was intrigued by the combination, though, and I decided to take a chance.
I am so glad I did.
I loved this depiction of Draco. It was realistic and true to his character, and yay for him getting the chance to be himself and not simply another heir to the same tired Malfoy life. I adored your Rita. Slytherin to the core, and, again, extended from canon in an excellent way.
This was also very hot. That is always an extra-added bonus. :)