I LUFF this! They're such real people, guarded and slightly awkward. I think I'm half in love with your Millicent by now myself; what with her gruffness, complete disregard for social conventions, the peeks at her inner fears and vulnerabilities, her offhand signs of affection (I got all warm inside when she left Neville the scones :D)... *happy sigh* Given that I can't really have her, and Neville's such a sweetie, they're so good for each other. And yay for their friends finally seeing it! Excellent story.
Also, the epilogue was pure win. I'd SO read that series. :D :D :D