Moody & Co
I really enjoyed this fic--as others have pointed out, you took seriousely the problems inherent in being both a member of the police and a member of a vigilante organization. When Moody's dual allegiance comes out, I liked that you gave all three parties very legitimate points and concerns.
And the way Mad-Eye, Gawain, and Rufus are all juggling their concerns for winning the war against their private feelings is well done.
A criticism, though; you & your beta aren't good at catching homonyms, and it really jerked me out of the story. "Too" interchanged with "to," making "due" instead of "do," a "fowl" instead of "foul" cage (a cage full of chickens?)--if you ever repost, which I hope you will, I hope you correct these.