Wow, this is just why I love this fest! I was pretty underwhelmed at the idea if this pairing but you totally changed my mind! I adored this! I love how you took two difficult, prickly women and made me genuinely care for and empathize with them WITHOUT washing away all the rougher, more unlikable aspects about them. Marjorie in her bunker with her dogs and keep out signs, lonely and drinking so much tea ... I love how you used the dogs to show her softer side.
Rita is like three different people in this story and yet she's also seamlessly herself. I love the idea of Rita Skeeter being a persona she created. I love how she's in a job she hates now. I love how you show that she too is lonely and has all these feelings, but sort of shoves them aside.
The ending with Harry was a surprise and a perfect way to wrap up a great story. Brilliant work, MA!