Thank you very much for your lovely and detailed comment!
It's really nice to see that several facets of the story came through as intended - the way that Sluggy does indeed have crush on Albus, the use of the Felix Felicis, and Sluggy's attitude to sex. Also I'm pleased to hear that the timing of the fic worked from your perspective - and after all that angst I couldn't bear not to give them a happy afterlife! *g*