Nice job with both characters; I like the slowly-developing trust and the way that Greg and Oliver stay true to their canon selves. I can definitely see them developing in the way after the war. I also like the way you show that just because Voldemort is dead, the wizarding world doesn't automatically go back to everything being fine. Some wounds are going to take a long time to heal, and there's still a lot of pain.
"He’s just another Death Eater to everyone else. But to me he’s my dad.” Very affecting.
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