|User:||hobbits_n_orli (posted by hermit9)|
This was my remix last year. This was extremely fun to write. Kinda like writing with a partner only they didn't know about it.
Title: Pretty Babies
Orig. Author: Geniusartist
Orig. Link: Pretty Babies
Rating: R-ish for a couple bad words and some clothed undulations
Disc: Made up. Not only is this not true, I didn't even make up the lies!
Changes: No longer an AU except in as much as it is still totally made up. Starts a bit before the original story. Gave some of the other guys something to do, filled it out a bit here and there with trivial stuff, a ball of lint that crawled in my ear while reading the rules for the challenge itself. Changed it to present tense because I can't write in past tense anymore for some reason, and I made Orlando kind of a twat. Kept the dialog almost exactly the same because it was really the meat of the original story. Orig. Word Count: 1600 Remix Word Count: 3900
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