This is not only the best story I have read in the woldcup but the best story I have read in the past I don't know 3 months. That's saying something too because I am already into Snarry_games. At first was unsure about the POV but you did it perfectly. I like seeing Harry and Draco from her eyes and it's just "her" because we don't even know her name. I love that she sees Draco as brave that touched me so much. The sex scene I was a bit nervous about at first because it was being overheard by a child, but then as I kept going it got kind of hot. Then I started crying as she described there kiss and how she didn't know people kissed for that long. I kept crying more till the end of the fic and even now I am still a little *sniff*.
I want so much for this to end happily and for Draco and Harry to escape together. I love an ambiguous ending though and I think maybe for right now or until otherwise I will think of them dieing in one another's arms. SHIT! Now I'm crying again. Ok maybe I'll think them getting out together ending.