Title: Memory
Fandom: Original (The Conductor)
Character/s: Ash, Chaz
Syllables: 50
Notes: For feather_qwill, who is a literary sadist. Fifty syllables, all in dialogue. In revenge, I didn't write for fandom at all.
( things we're all too young to know )
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( Prologue. )
There's more to come, but I'm getting all adjshfahs about this section alone, so thoughts would be nice, guys, plz. I like the first paragraph but the rest feels very blah-blah-blah... so it's a good thing that Ash is just about ready to take over. I do wish I could break out of present tense, but we'll see how it goes.
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Show a character in a room of his house; introduce us to small, specific details that will reveal what this character’s past is. Try to place the character in action.
( Backstory through Environment. )
Chaz doesn't feel quite in-character yet, but since this is... maybe three chapters into the novel, Ash is at an appropriate level of fascination, I think. I still have no timeframe for this. XD; I fail at everything. (Now that I have picked this icon, Scuttle seems like a good choice for Chaz, which is terrifying. XD)
...it is kind of amazing how calm and happy zoning out and writing for the last hour has made me. The world is a good place again. Why don't I do this all the time?
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