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Classier than Elvis on Velvet ([info]ranalore) wrote in [info]fuda_100,
@ 2008-03-31 18:13:00

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Entry tags:a: rana eros, c: fairy tales

Fanfic: Soft the Snow Comes
Title: Soft the Snow Comes
Author: Rana Eros
Challenge: Fairy Tales
Author's Notes: Oh, look, another double drabble inspired by an Andersen fairy tale from yours truly. Try to hide your surprise. Betaed by elizacakeEliza.

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The oni built a mirror once, made it of spite to reflect all the things they hated in the world, which was everything. Then they squabbled over what to do with it and it slipped from their fingers and broke, shards scattering on the wind.

Those shards struck any number of people, working their way under skin, into eyes and hearts. They magnified the flaws of whatever they reflected. When pointed outward, that meant family and friends, and those people grew cruel and hateful, withdrawing from their loved ones. When pointed inward, that meant people were forced to see their own evil. Most died of what they saw.

Not all the ghosts were left to rest, however, and one man, good and kind, was made to reap the dead until his tears flushed out the splinter obscuring his vision. He was too kind, however, and the splinter was lodged deep, and while he prayed for forgiveness, he thought himself unworthy. Nor could he let the love of his friends console him, when he saw only his flaws.

When he could bear no more, he began to pray instead for numbness. Winter heard him. He didn't resist when its ambassador came.

END



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[info]veleda_k
2008-04-01 02:44 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is excellent. It's so stark, sad, and chilling (no pun intended). It just hurts to read. (Which means that you did a superb job.)

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[info]ranalore
2008-04-09 12:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you! There was going to be a bit about how Spring came to save him, followed by Summer, but I ran out of room and sometimes Tsuzuki's just gotta wallow, you know?

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[info]veleda_k
2008-04-10 04:43 am UTC (link)
There was going to be a bit about how Spring came to save him, followed by Summer, but I ran out of room

I'm actually rather glad to know that, because I kind of sort of inserted that part in my head anyway. (Velda=sap.)

But it is true that no one wallows quite like Tsuzuki.

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[info]ranalore
2008-04-21 12:58 am UTC (link)
Well, Gerda did come for Kay, so the subtext is already there. *G*

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