I love it! Silly but lovely. I super-squeed at “Relax, you cannot fall. I won’t let you. I’d have to let go of you, wouldn’t I? We do not want that.” <3 The only thing that made me blip was sometimes you said 'wizarding society' and sometimes 'magical society'. Why would you use, to quote Fleur, 'such a phallocentric and outdated phrase', 'wizarding society', seeing as magical society contains both wizards and witches and other creatures?