Ack, I can't believe I didn't comment on this previously, but looking at the reveal made it clear that I, y'know, fail.
This was amazing. I've never really cared much about Millicent and I actively despise Pansy, but this fic really blew me away. I felt so much sympathy for Millicent, and Pansy was believable and real and I found myself liking her. The characterizations were very strong and the fic itself was beautifully crafted and bittersweet. I loved it.