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Still, where did the lighter fluid come from? ([info]emiime) wrote in [info]emific,
@ 2007-08-23 00:01:00

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Entry tags:character: alice, character: frank, genre: angst, genre: het, pairing: frank/alice, rating: r

Do you remember I remember (Frank/Alice, R)
Title: Do you remember I remember
Pairing: Frank/Alice
Rating: R
Word Count: 890
Warnings: Ouchy.
Disclaimer: Not mine. JKR's.
Summary: There are some things that Alice remembers.
Notes: Thanks and love to [info]freckles42 for everything. Originally posted 8/2/07 at LJ.



Frank you're here Frank

Hello my darling good morning hello

The sun is coming in the windows I remember the sun

I wish I could speak to you want to tell you how I love you Frank will you touch me oh hello good morning my love and hold my hand

Your hand is bigger and warmer than mine I love its creases have your hands really always been so wide sometimes I forget parts of you but then they are there and I remember again

I'm here put your head on my shoulder there it fits the same as it ever did but your hair is silver now against my shoulder silver like gum wrappers when did it change from brown my darling I don't remember it changing and it feels different now too it isn't smooth anymore but coarse and silver but beautiful still

Put your hand here on my knee oh Frank my darling my love

Come let me kiss you with my mouth on yours do you remember my darling we laughed and danced and kissed I kissed you and you kissed me and we kissed the baby oh the baby remember the baby Frank sometimes I forget he's Neville who comes to visit

The baby had a fat round belly Frank and it was smooth and we kissed him on it and he laughed and we laughed and I love you Frank let me kiss you on your mouth let me kiss you on your belly Frank like we did to the baby and it made him laugh

If we're quiet we can lie together the Healers don't mind as long as we're quiet

We're married after all my love

Put your arm around me I'll help you lift it here like this oh my darling that is lovely and warm and cosy so cosy and tight

And we move together remember like this you remember I know you do it's been a long time my Frank my love but we remember

Do you remember I used to be so pretty and so round and my hair was black and my cheeks were red and you said Alice Alice I Love You and you kissed me everywhere and we had to shh shh so we didn't wake the baby and I kissed you everywhere too everywhere that was smooth and rough and warm

And you my darling so handsome with big brown eyes your eyes are always turned away from me now and turned away from everything won't you look at me my darling and kiss my eyes

That's right I know you remember

Oh the way we used to slide like this and like this and like this and you would pull up my dress and oh Frank I would laugh but shh Frank don't wake the baby

You would always be hard before I got your trousers undone I remember of course I do and now you don't wear trousers anymore at all it's always pyjamas always for me too but I will pretend this is a new dress and oh don't you love it

And we would fall back onto the bed kissing and laughing there was always so much kissing and so much laughing

And you would push inside I'd be wet feel me Frank touch me please and you'd have your arms around me

And you'd be so warm but we had to leave the windows closed don't want to disturb the neighbours and shh Frank shh don't wake the baby

Touch me Frank I love you

I love when you look at me oh my darling

Beautiful

We had a big bed and it took up the whole room and it was covered with pillows and the big down quilt so soft and we fell into it together deep and warm and surrounded do you remember Frank

And we rolled and we laughed and we kissed and we touched and yes Frank please touch me make your hands remember I'll touch you too and we'll remember together

I wonder who sleeps in our bed now Frank do you think it's gone now or can we go back

I don't remember the rest of our house

Shh we have to be quiet the Healers don't mind if we're quiet

Don't wake the baby

Who takes care of the baby Frank who gives him food and who loves him when he cries

You loved me when I smiled and when I cried I don't smile or cry anymore but show me how you love me

If I get on my back can your body remember

I think mine can

And yes there it's like that the slide like that and push and I remember you Frank and kiss me kiss me please oh I used to say such things to you I remember do you remember

I used to say Oh Please Frank Harder there were things I said that made you turn red oh yes I remember and it gets sticky somehow doesn't it and that's how we got a baby

I remember

Hurts a bit to remember like this with the pushing but the kissing makes it better

Frank why is it like this I can't remember why we're like this

Frank I love you

Shh Frank

Don't wake the baby



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[info]bambu
2007-09-08 12:00 am UTC (link)
This is poignant, heartbreaking, and beautiful.

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[info]emiime
2007-09-09 05:44 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]gmta_nz
2008-02-14 07:12 am UTC (link)
I came here via [info]secretsolitaire's rec. It's beautiful.

I'm completely broken, crying like a baby.

But it's beautiful.

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[info]emiime
2008-02-22 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much!

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(Anonymous)
2008-06-21 09:25 am UTC (link)
Thank you for writing a story that treats this couple like the people they are and also shows us how much they lost.

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[info]emiime
2008-06-21 05:19 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-28 01:24 am UTC (link)
I'm vegablack62 from live journal. I reread this piece after seeing it recommended by Lyras and I love it even more the second reading. I think I am the anonymous poster who left the above entry. If I'm not I agree with it completely. It is good to see the Longbottoms treated with respect. I love Alice's voice in this story. She has forgotten much but also remembers much too. She is confused and remote from reality but also full of feeling. I could see her being attached to Neville but also unaware of who exactly he is. I think this is a very canon representation even if it is disturbing to people.

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[info]emiime
2008-07-28 06:38 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much! So glad you liked this, and thank you for the thoughtful comment.

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[info]gm_weasley
2008-07-22 10:34 am UTC (link)
[Here via [info]lyras's rec.]

This is so very beautiful. Ouchy, as you say, but beautiful. *sigh*

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[info]emiime
2008-07-22 11:26 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]qzee
2008-07-28 11:26 pm UTC (link)
oh. Ouch. This story hurt me. It's just so sad. *goes off to cry for a minute*

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[info]emiime
2008-07-29 01:09 am UTC (link)
Aw! *passes tissues*

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[info]qzee
2008-07-29 05:06 am UTC (link)
*uses them* I wrote a story, vaguely inspired by the above. Found here http://community.livejournal.com/hprarepairs/367902.html dedicated to you. Hope you like it.

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[info]emiime
2008-07-31 01:15 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow, thank you! Am running to read it right now!

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