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I hope you don't mind me posting this here, but I wasn't sure where else to try, I'm looking for a beta for the following story:

Title: After the Party
Author:  fancypantsdylan
Pairing(s): Severus/Harry/Draco
Timeline: AU sometime after DH.
Warnings: NC-17, threesomes
Word count: 1,387
Beta type: This is a sequel to a fic I wrote for Harry’s birthday http://rage-jt.livejournal.com/5193.html#cutid1. I need someone to help with my grammar and sentence structure, constructive criticism is always welcome as long as its balanced with feedback for reasons why, otherwise how can we learn. I’m happy with the overall story but any suggestions on making it better would be welcome. So if anyone can help, that would be great.