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Dexy (dead_sexydexy) wrote in dexy_demented,
@ 2008-04-23 20:04:00

Entry tags:

limerick, mwpp, mwpp era, poetry, severus, sirius

Nose in a Book: Limerick; MWPP, Snape pg
Title: Nose in a Book
Prompt:phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: #37 Book
Author: dead_sexydexy in dexy_demented
Rating: PG
Form: Limerick
Characters: MWPP, Snape
Notes: Marauder mischief. Peter is the one who speaks.
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
Comments and Concrit: Are always welcome.

Nose in a Book

"Hey mates, over there! Look!
Snivellus, with is nose in a book."
The Marauders moved in,
Wormtail started to grin
As Pads turned Sniv's nose into a hook.

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elethian
2008-04-30 11:27 pm UTC (link)

Maybe he's born with it, maybe it's Sirius? lol.

Umm.... I keep wanting to say "mateys" for the stress, heheh. The last line is giving me a lot of trouble... I keep trying to say "gave it a hook" but that sounds like he punched him. And "made" sounds like he's now got a pirate's hook on his face, lol. I dunno, i can't come up with anything better for that... so this isn't a final suggestion but I don't want to just trail off, either.

"Hey everyone, over there, look!
Snivellus with nose in a book."
The Marauders moved in;
Wormtail started to grin
As Padfoot made Sniv's nose a hook.

Whew! All done. These were fun. Now I'm picturing brightly coloured illustrations and making it a Child's First Book of Tormenting Severus Snape, lol.

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	dead_sexydexy 2008-05-01 01:20 am UTC (link)
	Thanks SO very much for taking the time to do this. OMG, I've gotten lazy since my poetry beta left me for silly things like pursuing her PhD and her fabbity boyfriend. RL is keeping me from looking at the suggestions and making changes tonight, but it's on the top of my list for tomorrow. Thanks Again! (Reply to this) (Parent)