Entry tags:

dumbledore, limerick, ootp era, pg-13, poetry, severus, sirius

Jeers and Sneers: Limerick; Sirius, Severus pg-13
Title: Jeers and Sneers
Prompt: phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: # 20 "I enjoyed the meetings, too. It was like having friends."--Luna Lovegood
Author: dead_sexydexy in dexy_demented
Rating: PG-13
Form: Limerick
Characters: Sirius, Snape
Notes: OotP Era
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
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Jeers and Sneers

"I know why you like these meetings," Black jeered.
"Oh really, do tell then," Snape sneered.
"With interaction, it begins
To seem you have friends."
Albus sighed, they were worse than he'd feared.

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	elethian 2008-04-30 10:42 pm UTC (link)
	The first line is too long and I don't think the half-rhyme is working. I like the last line. "You must like these meetings," Black jeered. "Oh, really? Do tell why," Snape sneered. "It lets you pretend To seem you have friends." Albus sighed; they were worse than he'd feared. (Reply to this)

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