I'm so sorry I didn't respond when this was posted! I was hardly online for Christmas Day. D: Thank you so much for writing this for me~! ♥
Ohh, I think my favourite part was when Remus saw Sev. I can't imagine what was running through his head when he saw him, even though he reached for his wand. I'm so happy with the way you've set up the scene - it was played exactly how I was hoping it would have been, and I love! Lily's interruption. :D Hee.
I totally love it when Remus gets to say things like 'shag you right here'. Hee♥
I really enjoyed this! The stand-off in the market, the market, Lily taking care of Sev even though he was clearly a DE, their argument, everything in the flat... Thank you so much!!