OH my god! I'm so glad I didn't cheat and read this when it first came in. It's beautiful! I loved how happy severus was and kept reapeating "she kissed him". I loved how jealous and sad Remus was that he felt he lost his chance. I loved how the world was perfect for Lily and she realised what that meant. It made me tear up when she and Severus fought and how cold and terse his replies became. Remus turning angry, and Lily still trying being affected and with tears in her eyes.
The ending where Remus approaches Severus hesitantly and the end that followed, it was wonderful.
Thank you so much for this wonderful and beautiful gift!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!