Oh, wow! That was absolutely wonderful. I haven't been much of a nextgen reader until now, but these characterisations really have me completely hooked and I just want to read more! I adore the fact that your James is so clear on what he wants and goes after it without shame or angst - and that Teddy, though reluctant and feeling guilty, is able to see that James isn't any kind of victim in the situation. Hah, but there couldn't really be any doubt could there:
"You. Can. Fuck. Me," says James, as if talking to an idiot, head tilting from side to side with each word. "I'd let you."
"You. Can. Fuck. Me," says James, as if talking to an idiot, head tilting from side to side with each word. "I'd let you."
Fantastic! :D