This is great!!! Thank you so much. Of course I never mind the addition of Severus, especially when Minerva is involved. How lovely: two of my favorite kinks in one. Minerva's hair is simply gorgeous, and you've made the most of its placement; I love the peacock-tail fan of it, and Rufus's fists. The boots under the bed are a perfect touch (wish I owned them!) The buttons on Severus's coat, his own hair, his (apparently) flushed cheeks. . .an excellent presence. You are too good to me, my dear! What a fine gift.