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Kinky Kristmas 2017: Comment Kink Edition! 
3rd December 2017 12:00
Greetings and welcome to
Kinky Kristmas 2017: Comment Kink Edition!


Our members have made requests for stocking stuffers that would help make their holidays happy -- and kinky, of course! Now you all -- both members and watchers -- have the opportunity to play Santa and fulfill those requests. In the form of comment kink!

How to Stuff Our Stockings:

• Request fills must be a minimum of 200 words (if fic) or a sketch equivalent (if art).
• There is no maximum limit, but remember that long pieces are in no way required. Please don't hesitate to participate because you can "only" write a few words or do a simple sketch!
• Since fills may be short, we're not going to be strictly policing the rating of each piece. Just remember this is Daily Deviant and we want to see some sex!
• Each request may be filled twice -- once by a member and once by a watcher.
• When filling a request, leave it in a comment directly in a reply to the request you're filling.
• When filling a request, note whether you're filling it as a watcher or a member.
• If you are now or have ever been a posting member of Daily Deviant, you'll be filling the requests as a member.
• Prompt claiming is available but optional. What this means is that you need not claim a request in order to fill it, but if it's already claimed by someone else, it's off limits.
• In order to claim a request, comment directly in a reply to the request stating that you're claiming it. Be sure to note whether you're claiming it as a member or a watcher.
• Since we want as many goodies in our fishnet stockings as possible, there will be an expiration date on claims. One week after a claim is made (as per the time stamp on the comment), if the prompt has not been filled, the claim expires and the prompt is open for claiming or filling by someone else. (We'll try to keep track and delete the expired ones, but we may miss a few, so you can just keep an eye on the time stamps.) So if a prompt you really love appears to be taken, remember to check back.
• If you've made a claim that has expired, you may still post a fill in reply to the prompt as long as no one else fills it or claims it first.
• Participants may have a total of two outstanding claims at a time. I.e., you may claim two requests, then when you've filled one, you may claim a third, etc.
• Additional prompts could appear throughout the month depending upon participation levels and demand.
Commenting, interacting, and generally having fun is welcome and encouraged!! Fandom is all about interaction with like-minded perverts people. Let's enjoy some friendly, smutty holiday merry-making! ;D

Got all that? Okay, good! Now...

LET THE STUFFING BEGIN!
(Double entendre totally intended, naturally...)
Comments 
4th December 2017 20:05 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2

He moves closer, so that he’s almost standing between her legs. He slides one hand onto the inside of her thigh, and enjoys the way the hot skin trembles a little at his touch. Everything about this is wrong. He’s seducing his sister, in public, pretending they’re strangers to each other. He’s going to push his hand between her legs, his fingers into her cunt, rub his thumb around her clit and watch her fall apart and try to pretend she isn’t.

Her breath hitches as his fingers slip higher, feather-light against the crease between her leg and her crotch. She opens her legs just that little bit wider, inviting him in.

“Do you often let strange men do this to you?” James asks, the thought inappropriately hot. He imagines Lily coming here without him, flirting and seducing and then going home all apparent innocence and sweetness.

Her expression is wicked as she replies, “Wouldn’t you like to know?”

For that, he presses his index finger inside her, up to the knuckle, enjoying the small gasp she makes. He touches forbidden territory in more ways than one as he says,

“What do you think your daddy would say if he could see you now?”

Her eyes widen: mentioning family is strictly forbidden, and James knows it. But she leans forward, a motion which pushes him deeper inside her.

“He’d tell me not to be taken in by older men.”

“Oh dear.” James’s finger moves in and out, in and out. She is wet, and clenching against the intrusion with deliberate intent. “What a naughty girl you are.”

She forces herself to take a sip of her drink. Her “Mmm,” could theoretically be enjoyment of that, but James knows what it really is.

He moves his thumb through the wetness and then up to her clit. Her mouth is slightly open now as he fucks her slowly with his finger as his thumb slides circles higher up. Without ceasing his movements, he takes a drink himself, his eyes focused on hers. He wonders the entire club can’t feel the tension between them.

“I think you’re the one taking me in,” James says, pushing a second finger inside her.

“I think you like it,” she says, her words halting and gasped as his motion increases its pace.

“Not as much as you.”

He is ruthless now, making her fall apart in public, fucking her where anyone could see. If any wizard or witch happened in here… James and Lily are well-known. Public figures just because of something their dad did years before their birth. If they were seen…

“Imagine they could see you now,” he whispers, and it is enough, alongside the pressure of his fingers and thumb.

She jerks, catching herself and biting into her bottom lip. Her eyes never leave James’s as she comes undone in front of him. He fucks her through it, gentle motions with his fingers, curling up inside her. When she comes down, he pulls his fingers free and then puts them in his mouth, sucking deliberately.

“You...” she says.

He gives her a lopsided grin; hails the barman and orders her another cocktail. She spilled the remnants of the first as she came – her hand must taste of cherries now. Then he gives her a little nod.

“Don’t be late home – little sister,” he says; and is gone.
4th December 2017 20:41 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Holy fuuuuuuuuuck! JFC! This is everything everything everything I could have hoped for and MORE! Like, omg, am I wearing a name tag that says, "And mentioning 'her daddy' would be quite alright too"? LOL! :P And the way she opens her legs for him! And James playing it all cool while he does it! And I loooove that break when he calls her filthy! I mean, DAMN. This was... just exactly everything I love about this dirtywrong pairing! THANK YOU!!!!
5th December 2017 17:42 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Eeeeeeeeee! So pleased you like it! I hoped when you said "no Harry/Ginny" you meant the pairing, not that I wasn't allowed to mention either of the characters, but I wasn't totally sure (hence a bit "mentioning family was forbidden" being aimed at you as well as at the situation). Glad it worked for Lily AND you <3 <3 <3

I've never ever written this pairing before, but your prompt just was perfect. I read it and could immediately see it in my mind (yeah, clearly I have a dirtywrong mind, but I'm in good company, right? ;) )

*happy*
4th December 2017 21:00 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
OMFG, this is deliciously wrong and yet perfectly right. I can imagine Harry's head exploding if he knew what was happening, the poor man, and Jamie is so devilish in mentioning him.
5th December 2017 17:43 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Oh gods, poor Harry! Let's leave him in blissful innocence with his childhood sweetheart whilst his kids porn it up without him knowing ;) Thank you!
4th December 2017 21:56 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Woah, this is fantastically dirtywrong hot! I love all the attention to detail in your writing here and the way they each have to pretend nothing's happening while everything is happening. Great job!
5th December 2017 17:44 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
*blushes*

Thank you. The prompt was so beautiful that it made it far too easy to write.
4th December 2017 22:15 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Oh, UNF!! This is wickedly hot and I am all aflail over it!
5th December 2017 17:46 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Says someone whom I know for sure has written amazingly hot JS/LL fic. Thank you, lovely.
5th December 2017 03:24 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Damn, this is hot! I love the details, and the way you build the background of their relationship. And that last line!! Wonderful work.
5th December 2017 17:48 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Thank you <3 I really shouldn't have found this as easy to write as I did. I'm sure it says terrible things about my psyche. Thank fuck for DD, where I can write it and not be judged :)
5th December 2017 14:32 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Everything about this was delicious and filthy and so hot! oh my god!
5th December 2017 17:48 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Yay, thank you :) It was so enjoyable to write.
9th December 2017 09:15 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
OH MY GOOODDDDD AJHJDGHJDBGUD!!!!

!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!

GOD, this is so, SO hot, and I am ruined. Just, all of this is amazing -- the set up, the fingering (asjddjfd!!!), james sucking on her fingers and then speculating that her other hand must taste of cherries, the dirtyhotwrongness of it all, THE MENTION OF WHAT HER DADDY MUST THINK!

I am dead. You are amazing. GUH!
10th December 2017 19:29 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
*blushes*

So glad you liked it. First time writing this, and I'm straight in with the daddy reference...
12th December 2017 17:25 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Mmm delicious!!!
13th December 2017 12:12 - Re: FILL: Strangers at a bar (James Sirius/Lily Luna) 2
Thanks. The prompt was perfect.
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