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Birthday Card Comment Kink! 
19th March 2017 00:01
Greetings and welcome to
Birthday Card Comment Kink!


Our members have made birthday wishes for smutty little ficlets and sketches that would make their birthday very happy indeed. Now everyone has the opportunity to fulfill those wishes -- in the form of comment pr0n!

The birthday card is now open and awaiting your signature! It will remain open until the end of April.

Please read the information and instructions before you sign our birthday card:

• Request fills must be a minimum of 200 words (if fic) or a sketch equivalent (if art). The maximum for fic is what fits into a single comment box.
• Since fills will be short, we're not going to be strictly policing the rating of each piece. Just remember this is Daily Deviant and we want to see some sex!
• Each request may be filled twice -- once by a member and once by a watcher.
• When filling a request, leave it in a comment directly in a reply to the request you're filling.
• When filling a request, note whether you're filling it as a watcher or a member.
• If you are now or have ever been a posting member of Daily Deviant, you'll be filling the requests as a member.
• Claiming of requests is available but optional. What this means is that you need not claim a request in order to fill it, but if it's already claimed by someone else, it's off limits.
• In order to claim a request, comment directly in a reply to the request stating that you're claiming it. Be sure to note whether you're claiming it as a member or a watcher.
• Since we want as many kinky birthday cards as possible, there is an expiration date on claims. One week after a claim is made (as per the time stamp on the comment), if the prompt has not been filled, the claim expires and the prompt is open for claiming or filling by someone else. (We'll try to keep track and delete the expired ones, but we may miss a few, so you can just keep an eye on the time stamps.) So if a prompt you really love appears to be taken, remember to check back (although we hope you'll be following and playing along all month long!).
• If you've made a claim that has expired, you may still post a fill in reply to the prompt as long as no one else fills it or claims it first.
• Participants may have a total of two outstanding claims at a time. I.e., you may claim two requests, then when you've filled one, you may claim a third, etc.
• Additional prompts may continue to appear, so do check back!
Commenting, interacting, and generally having fun is welcome and encouraged!! Fandom is all about interaction with like-minded perverts people. Let's enjoy some friendly, smutty celebrating! ;D

Got all that? Okay, good! Now...

RACY RACERS, START YOUR EROTIC ENGINES!
Comments 
21st March 2017 14:41 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Harry loves Draco’s arse. Loves looking at it, loves patting it when they’re out in public and he’s feeling possessive, loves clutching it as they fuck, so as he bends his head, his heart is pounding with anticipation.

At the first flick of his tongue against his hole, Draco stiffens. Ignoring him, Harry presses his nose to Draco’s skin, closes his eyes, and proceeds to thoroughly map the dimensions of that furled opening.

Draco manages to stay quiet for a few moments, but soon enough he’s trembling, his legs moving restlessly, his hips shifting as he moans into his pillow.

Harry ignores all that, too. His world has narrowed to giving Draco pleasure, to exploring all of him he can, to making him come apart under Harry’s tongue.

Draco’s hole is clenching, as if asking for something, and Harry, determined to give it what it needs, presses his tongue to the very centre, penetrating just inside.

It’s as if something breaks in Draco. “Fuck! Harry!” he shouts, his arse pressing up against Harry’s face. “Please—”

Harry groans. He’s hard, so hard, and all he wants to do is shift back and shove his cock as deep as it will go, but no, he also wants Draco to come from his tongue alone, so he persists, wriggling his tongue inside Draco, sealing his lips around his hole, fucking him with his mouth.

Draco’s trembling, nonsense words falling from his lips. Harry’s pretty sure he hears fabric tearing, and then he feels the shudders. Draco’s shaking, crying out, his sphincter muscles contracting around Harry’s tongue, and a moment later, Harry feels dampness seeping onto the sheets.

Harry pulls his tongue out, gently circling the hole a few times before shifting away. Draco looks spent, broken.

Trembling with his own need, Harry casts the quickest Lubrication Charm of his life on his cock, positions it, and slides home.

Draco moans weakly as Harry fucks him at a furious pace, his normal finesse gone. Chasing his pleasure quickly, it only takes a few strokes for Harry to come, pumping his seed deep inside Draco. With a groan, he collapses on top of Draco and struggles to catch his breath.

“Heavy,” Draco whinges.

Without a word, Harry pulls out, rolling over onto his back to stare at the ceiling. He’s utterly wasted, shagged out.

Draco rolls onto his back as well before finally curling into Harry’s side. Harry’s arms encircle him and they lie there for a while.

“Well?” Harry whispers into Draco’s hair. “That wasn’t so bad, was it?”

Draco huffs softly. “You’re going to make me say it, aren’t you?” he grouses, but Harry can hear the humour in his voice.

“Yes, I rather think I am,” he says.

“Fine. It was…acceptable.”

Harry laughs. “Acceptable enough that you think you’d be up for it again?”

Draco’s thumbs are playing with Harry’s nipples. “I could probably be persuaded.”

“Brilliant.” Harry hums. “Let’s clean up and go to sleep.”

“Mmhm.” Draco agrees.

Once they’ve charmed the sheets clean and dry, and Draco’s Summoned a blanket to cover them, Harry’s eyes drift closed.

“Harry. One thing.”

“Mmhm, what?” Harry mumbles.

“You never said who introduced you to rimming.”

Harry smiles. “Does it matter?”

He hears Draco yawn before he presses his face into Harry’s neck. “No, I suppose not.” He chuckles. “Although, just so you know, I’m definitely never kissing you ever again.”

Harry laughs. “We’ll see about that.”

~
21st March 2017 15:14 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Hot damn, that was absolutely scorching!!!! Unffff!!!!

I love how prissy Draco is about the idea at the start - and then how determined he is to take one for the team and get it out of the way immediately!

And their dynamic is wonderful! The dialogue is brilliant; Harry is so wonderfully reassuring and patient. It's no wonder he managed to convince Draco to let him try it.

This little paragraph creates such a fun, sexy picture of their relationship:

Harry loves Draco’s arse. Loves looking at it, loves patting it when they’re out in public and he’s feeling possessive, loves clutching it as they fuck, so as he bends his head, his heart is pounding with anticipation.

...And then the way things escalate when the rimming begins, woah! I was gaping at the screen! This bit in particular damn near killed me:

Harry groans. He’s hard, so hard, and all he wants to do is shift back and shove his cock as deep as it will go, but no, he also wants Draco to come from his tongue alone, so he persists, wriggling his tongue inside Draco, sealing his lips around his hole, fucking him with his mouth.

!!!!!!

So in short, this was wonderful. Thank you so much for doing such a wonderful job with my prompt! <333
22nd March 2017 09:27 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
*g*
Thank you, dear! *beams*
Haha! Prissy is definitely my headcanon for Draco. ;)
I love writing dialogue, so yay that you enjoyed it.
*nods* Harry is pretty damned persuasive when motivated. *g*
Yay that you liked it! *bounces*
21st March 2017 15:24 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Oh gods this is the hottest thing ever. *flails at you*

Geez, rimming isn't even particularly one of my kinks (I mean, I like it, obviously, but -) but fucking hell,this is hot!

Gorgeous, darling. Lovely, uptight Draco who doesn't like the whole idea, and then the way he falls apart...
22nd March 2017 09:29 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
*glee*
Thank you, lovely!
I know what you mean about rimming. I mean it's nice, but I usually use it as a prelude to other things (in fic!), so concentrating on it was fun and different. :)
Uptight Draco was a lot of fun to write. *g*
<3
21st March 2017 16:56 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Ooo, seriously hot stuff! Loved how reluctant Draco was--thankfully Harry can be quite persuasive!
22nd March 2017 09:30 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Thanks, hon!
Oh yes, Harry is quite convincing when motivated. ;)
I'm so pleased you liked it! <3
21st March 2017 17:37 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Never enough rimming! \o/ That was smoking hot! I love how shy Draco seemed at the beginning and then, oh good god, he's melting and dying for it! YES!

I love that he's jealous of who introduced Harry to the concept and then, god, I love how Harry's possessive in turn

Harry loves Draco’s arse. Loves looking at it, loves patting it when they’re out in public and he’s feeling possessive, loves clutching it as they fuck, so as he bends his head, his heart is pounding with anticipation.

Goooooood! Everything about this was perfect. Loved it!

22nd March 2017 09:33 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Thank you, hon!
Yeah, I figured even though he thinks it's not his thing, Draco would still be jealous about Harry doing it with someone else. *g* That's just SO him, you know?
And possessive!Harry is totally my headcanon for him. *nods* I'm not even conscious that I write him like that anymore. :)
Yay that you liked it! <3
21st March 2017 22:08 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
MMmm. That was hot. I wonder how long Harry will have to wait before Draco's begging him to do it again? ;D Lovely, hon.
22nd March 2017 09:34 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Haha! Yes, I suspect it won't be that long.
What may take longer is having Draco do it to Harry. ;)
Thank you, sweetie! Glad you liked it. <3
24th March 2017 14:12 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Ahhhh yes!!!! This is divine! I love how Harry had to persuade him to try it, and how he persisted until Draco was a mess getting his mind blown! <3
25th March 2017 15:45 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Heh. Maybe Draco will trust Harry next time?
Nah, I suspect it's too much fun allowing himself to be ~persuaded. ;)
Thank you!
27th March 2017 22:34 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Anonymous
Methinks Draco will be requesting that again. And I note that Harry's not too worried about future kissing. :D

~ Sesheta
30th March 2017 22:33 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
You know, I suspect you're right about that. No way Draco's not letting Harry do that again. :)
Thanks, dear! <3
30th March 2017 18:34 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Ahhh this was so good!

You are to the queen at infusing humor and smut so seamlessly. I was grinning and drooling all at the same time while reading this. I just love Draco's snark and Harry's confidence.

What a lovely and hot read!
30th March 2017 22:32 - Re: An Introduction to Rimming
Aww, thank you, lovely! <3
*nods* Harry knows his Draco and knew he'd love it. ;)
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