Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
Art/Comic: Rivers in Egypt 
13th February 2014 19:28
Title: Rivers in Egypt
Artist: [info]akatnamedeaster
Media:Col-erase on cardstock
Characters/Pairings:Sirius/Severus
Rating: NC-17
Kinks/Themes Chosen: oculophilia: being aroused by eyes or specific kinds of eyes, bottoms: the receptive or passive partners in sex
Warnings: Anal, oral, wall!sex, half-dressed!sex, handjobs, fondling, kissing, explicit POV shots, sentimentality, curled toes, and bitten lips.
Summary: "We lie loudest, when we lie to ourselves."
A/N: Since my posting date is the day before the holiday dedicated to greeting cards and overpriced gas station roses, I decided to do something a bit softer than my usual. Many apologies for the punny title & sentimental content within, hopefully the graphic porn will help ease the sting. Many thanks to [info]unbroken_halo for the beta, any typos(which I will invariably find after I post this), and bad writing are completely my own.

















Comments 
14th February 2014 00:36
THIS IS GREAT!! Awesome job! ♥
16th February 2014 13:55
Thank you! :)
14th February 2014 01:20
Oh wow. Love it.
16th February 2014 13:56
Thanks very much!
14th February 2014 01:34
Beyond perfect, bebé! Soo stunning! <3333!
16th February 2014 13:56
Thanks, I figured I had to go all out for V-Day. :)
14th February 2014 01:37
The way you've drawn his eyes really sells it. Very well done!
16th February 2014 13:56
Thank you. :)
14th February 2014 01:43
Very well pieced together and such obvious care between the two, that ending is perfect.
16th February 2014 13:57
Thanks, I reckoned having them fall into each other's arm would be a bit much so understated ending it was.
14th February 2014 01:45
Oh myyyyyyy, this is a zillion kinds of wonderful !!! *ogles*
16th February 2014 13:58
Thank you, glad you liked it!
14th February 2014 02:08
Aw yeah, a little face to face action can weaken the best of men!
Landing on his back was the best thing that ever happened to Severus. :)
16th February 2014 13:59
Indeed, they're kind of forgetting the unspoken rule about distance keeping, ah well. :)
14th February 2014 02:17
Oh yes. Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. *Actually said and counted the 'yes's to type*

Love it.
16th February 2014 13:59
*L* Thanks! :)
14th February 2014 08:51
Fantastic!!!!! More please!
16th February 2014 14:00
Thank you!

More please!

*g* Well, there about 700 pages that came before this. ;)
22nd February 2014 08:26
Woot woot! *runs off to read*
22nd February 2014 14:47
*g* Thanks! And here's as good a place to start as any:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/552003/chapters/983515

or just:

http://archiveofourown.org/users/Acatnamedeaster

Hope you enjoy!

24th February 2014 07:10
Thank you very much for the links!
14th February 2014 11:59
Absolutely beautiful! Love how the story progresses. <3
16th February 2014 14:01
Thanks! I keep meaning to do that "first time" story and so far this is as close as I've gotten.
14th February 2014 12:55
What a feast for our eyes. Yum!
16th February 2014 14:01
Thank you. :)
14th February 2014 13:05
Mmmm, Severus' eyes... I don't blame Sirius for falling for him. Because he has, in spite of that Egyptian river!
Great job, hon. ♥
16th February 2014 14:02
*l* Thanks and yeah, the "lady" doth protest to much. :)
14th February 2014 15:45
WOW!!! Stunning work! I'm especially fond of the almost-kiss on page 2. The love you feel for these characters really comes through. What a lovely Valentine.
16th February 2014 14:03
Thanks and you know, out of all those panels, that's my favorite as well. :)
15th February 2014 02:08
Jesus, that's really beautiful, Kat!
16th February 2014 14:03
Thank you. :)
15th February 2014 14:01
Absolutely gorgeous piece of work. This melted my heart, and your skill is just wonderful. The characters and emotions leap off the page, it's hot and full of feeling. Excellent pacing and progression of the story. A real delight!

Thank you so much for creating this <3
16th February 2014 14:04
Thank you. :) I felt a little constrained storywise since I'm so accustomed to having 20+ pages to say what I have to say but I'm glad the pacing and story worked for you.
15th February 2014 14:33
Llllllllove it! >_
16th February 2014 14:05
Thanks boo. :)
15th February 2014 20:27
Beautiful job. I love the gradual way you develop the relationship; I could see it happening just like this. The ending is great and plausible. The art overall is excellent -- sexy and hot and yet revealing of character. The eyes in particular are really effective.
16th February 2014 14:06
Thank you, I can't imagine things going any way but slowly and haltingly with either of these characters. :)
17th February 2014 19:25
That was gorgeous. Not just the art, which is stunning, but the story it tells it's amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. <3
17th February 2014 22:56
Thank you. :) I've never done a proper story here but the holiday demanded a little something.
17th February 2014 20:31
I love all the closeup views of different body parts. Plus, that panel with the view from the back was fantastic. If you can't tell, I really, really liked this. :)
17th February 2014 22:56
Thanks! I have to say, I lurve drawing that angle. :)
21st February 2014 00:54
Wow, you've outdone yourself. This is amazing -- love the end.
21st February 2014 15:47
Thank you. :) I was overdue to do something a bit more involved for DD and the theme this month was perfect.
5th April 2014 01:28 - Fantastic
Anonymous
There is a wealth of emotion and story told in your beautiful images.
5th April 2014 01:29 - Re: Fantastic
Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed making it. :)
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