I'm so glad to get comments on the structure; it is one of my favorite storytelling techniques and I'm always happy when it shines for a particular story.
And *grins* Thanks! I love writing this pairing; they are somehow always very hot and easy to write in bed (surprisingly, considering!). I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
And *grins* Thanks! I love writing this pairing; they are somehow always very hot and easy to write in bed (surprisingly, considering!). I'm glad you enjoyed the story!