Eek, so sorry it's taken me a couple of days to get back and comment properly! I've been too busy running KK to participate in it properly. ;)
First of all, I don't know if ragdoll told you who this was for or what the story was, so if she didn't... The short version is that, when one of my prompts was dropped, ragdoll very sneakily went off and asked you to do this piece for me. I didn't even get to see it until the night before I needed to post it. LOL So, yeah, this was a complete surprise to me.
Right, NOW! Wow, where to start...? I think the first thing that really grabs me about this is the dark, grittiness about it. The crosshatching gives it a very rough, dirty quality, and the stark contrast of the bright light entering the dark room through the open door just adds to that effect. It's just so neat sytlistically.
The precise instant that's captured is interesting. I can read it two different ways... The simple explanation is that it's that split second when he's realized that he's been caught in the act but hasn't had time to drop his cock react yet. But I also get the idea that he's realized he's been caught but doesn't particularly intend to stop. They get what they deserve for walking in, and he's getting off on their unintended voyeurism. His expression is half "oh, fuck!" and half "ohhhh, yeah..."
Thank you for doing this! (And thank you, ragdoll, for being all sneaky an' stuff!)
First of all, I don't know if ragdoll told you who this was for or what the story was, so if she didn't... The short version is that, when one of my prompts was dropped, ragdoll very sneakily went off and asked you to do this piece for me. I didn't even get to see it until the night before I needed to post it. LOL So, yeah, this was a complete surprise to me.
Right, NOW! Wow, where to start...? I think the first thing that really grabs me about this is the dark, grittiness about it. The crosshatching gives it a very rough, dirty quality, and the stark contrast of the bright light entering the dark room through the open door just adds to that effect. It's just so neat sytlistically.
The precise instant that's captured is interesting. I can read it two different ways... The simple explanation is that it's that split second when he's realized that he's been caught in the act but hasn't had time to
drop his cockreact yet. But I also get the idea that he's realized he's been caught but doesn't particularly intend to stop. They get what they deserve for walking in, and he's getting off on their unintended voyeurism. His expression is half "oh, fuck!" and half "ohhhh, yeah..."Thank you for doing this! (And thank you,