Great story! I loved the whole sunbeam idea, and the way you use it to describte the bleakness of the different war periods. some great lines: Or Dung, who, quite frankly, stank, but was a hell of a lot of fun to drink with.
Somewhere in the back of his mind, Padfoot whispered that it would be jolly good fun to chase her off the sofa It's inspired to use Padfoot to get the Marauder-side, and the Azkaban-survivor for the softer moments.
(if only Dumbledore would shut his wrinkled gob) As with the Mundungus-line, your World According To Sirius is so brilliantly IC and believable. Here too: Not that it had made any difference with his mother, come to think of it.
"Did I tell you to stop?" she said, and raised an eyebrow at him. Great. As is the rest of the scene!
some great lines:
Or Dung, who, quite frankly, stank, but was a hell of a lot of fun to drink with.
Somewhere in the back of his mind, Padfoot whispered that it would be jolly good fun to chase her off the sofa It's inspired to use Padfoot to get the Marauder-side, and the Azkaban-survivor for the softer moments.
(if only Dumbledore would shut his wrinkled gob) As with the Mundungus-line, your World According To Sirius is so brilliantly IC and believable. Here too: Not that it had made any difference with his mother, come to think of it.
"Did I tell you to stop?" she said, and raised an eyebrow at him. Great. As is the rest of the scene!