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- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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5th December 2009 00:21
EEEEEEEEEE.

OMG, I loved loved loved this. And you shouldn't have worried about it being too dark; it was just what I wished for and better. :D

Gah, where do I start? I'm afraid this is going to be a bit all over the place.

I really liked how you started, then the more I read the more I fell in love. I'm amazed how you managed to hit so many of my buttons and things I like, having only what little info was in my wish.

Okay, first, I always loved the idea of deep affection between Sirius and Regulus despite their family issues and you went exactly that way! It was so clear here that they really loved each other.

The Snape/Sirius dynamic - I love that pairing and I'm very picky about it but you wrote their dynamic exactly how I like it. Perfect. ♥

Like these lines about Sirius from Snape's POV that made me go "yes, yes, YES":
given the chance of losing Sirius from his family, he would be more than grateful.
he can't repress a disgusted sneer at the thought of crying over Sirius Black.
Sirius looks like he's about to puke. Severus wonders whether he's seen such a beautiful sight before: Sirius, on his knees, nude, on the point of falling apart in front of his despised enemy's eyes.
they might both be Blacks, but only one of them is 'Black' to him
He is pleading for mercy, and Severus could get hard on this moment for the rest of his life.
“You can't – you won't do this.” Sirius sounds ever more desperate; it is beautiful.
Severus wonders whether those truly are tears in his eyes, and if so, whether life can get any better than this.


Snape's maliciousness and cruelty filled me with glee. I loved how he got back at Sirius for all the years of bullying. But at the same time I felt really bad for Sirius and hated Snape for his cruelty. I loved that there were no heroes and villains here, that things weren't black and white. :) And poor Regulus, getting caught in the crossfire between the other two. If there was someone innocent here, it was him.

Brother on brother – it is sick, perverted... and unbelievably arousing.
I just loved how Snape was supposedly kind of disgusted at the sight but actually very turned on. *g*

Severus comes too: he has been standing so close to the pair that his come sprays across the desk, some of it splashing Regulus's face.
What did I say about my buttons being hit? This was so hot, guh!

And oooh, the ending! *shivers* A great line that ties everything to canon. Also, perhaps it's just me (and the lateness of the hour) but I thought I spotted a hint that what happened here might have something to do with a later estrangement between Sirius and Regulus? Also, also. I loved the use of present tense - it was perfect for this story. (And I think I might have had more to say? But it's past 2 am over here and I'm barely keeping my eyes open. >.>)

This was absolutely wonderful, dear mystery fellow member. :) (And I'm dying to know who you are!) Thank you SO much for fulfilling my wish. ♥!!!
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