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alisanne ([info]alisanne) wrote in [info]daily_deviant,
@ 2009-11-05 00:00:00

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Current mood: okay
Entry tags:*fic, 2009-11, author: alisanne, character: neville, content: anal, content: bdsm, content: dominance, content: oral sex, content: orgasm denial, content: spanking, content: threesome, theme: clamps

Fic: Required Relief (Neville, NC-17)
Title: Required Relief
Author: [info]alisanne
Characters: Neville Longbottom/?
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM.
Themes/kinks chosen: Clamps
Word Count: 1850
Summary: There are some nights the Neville just needs a break from being in command.
Author's notes: Thanks to [info]sevfan and [info]eeyore9990 for their assistance.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


~

Required Relief

~

“Luna?” Neville whispered as he crept into the room.

“Over here!”

Relieved, Neville walked forward and found Luna surrounded by books, a Kneazle on her lap. As he watched, they disappeared until she was sitting, cross-legged, on the floor. “It’s your turn?” she asked.

“Yep, I’m your relief.” He held out his hand and helped her to her feet. “Did you get some studying done?”

“Yes.” She smiled. “The room gives me good books to read. It’s not as if we can do any real studying anymore, after all.”

Neville sighed. “True. You should probably get back to Ravenclaw now, though. It wouldn’t do to have them discover that you’re gone.”

She nodded. “I know. Be careful, all right? I think there’s a Nargle infestation in here.”

“I’ll be careful,” Neville said, smiling. Luna never changed, bless her.

After she left, Neville waited for a few minutes. It wasn’t unusual for other students to seek refuge in the Room of Requirement after a particularly bad detention with the Carrows. When no one else arrived, however, Neville exhaled. It looked like he was on his own, which was exactly what he’d hoped for.

Closing his eyes, Neville concentrated hard, being very clear in his mind about what he wanted, what he needed. The first few times he’d tried this, he’d been too vague and, while the results had been okay, he’d not got everything he wanted from the experience.

He could feel the room settling around him, and when he opened his eyes, he smiled. It was perfect.

There was a bed of course, a large one, covered in red and gold fabric. Next to it was a wooden kneeler, and laid out on the bed were the implements for the evening. Neville’s breath hitched when he saw the plug, the clamps, and the flogger. Hands shaking, he got undressed, placing his robes and the rest of his clothes over a chair before walking over to the bed and perching on the edge. He reached for the lubricant, staring down at the vial for a long moment.

This was always the part that was hardest. If anyone came in and saw him like this--

He pushed that thought aside and, widening his legs, lay on his back and started to stretch himself. First one slick finger, then two, and still he continued, knowing that the plug needed a bit more preparation. He moaned and something caught his eye. He paused, blushing when he realised what it was.

The room had strategically placed a mirror so that he could see what he looked like as he stretched himself. Neville had to admit that the flushed, clearly aroused man looking back at him was far from the scared boy he remembered being. Not that he had much opportunity to be afraid lately. This year, everyone was looking to him for guidance, and he owed it to them to be strong.

But what about when I need to be taken care of?

Neville shook himself, snapping back to the present. That’s what this was for, wasn’t it? He was hard, his prick bouncing against his stomach, and as he inserted the plug and moved onto the kneeler, his breathing settled, calm washing over him. He was in someone else’s hands now.

The door opened and as footsteps approached, Neville kept his head bent, his hands clasped behind his back, and his thighs slightly apart to display the plug stretching his hole. It was all he could do not to shiver as the person walked up to him.

“Very good.” Neville felt a hand settle on his head, fingers fondling his hair. “You’re already here, ready and waiting for me, hm? I shall have to reward you.”

Neville swallowed hard, knowing not to move as he was circled. He stared down at polished dragonhide boots as they paused in front of him.

“Such a pretty picture you make.” The words were soft, yet Neville knew they would not stay that way. “But you’ve been disobedient this week, haven’t you?” His tone hardened. “Even though you don’t agree with your professors, they are your professors. You’ve been trying to thwart them again, haven’t you?”

Neville didn’t respond. None was expected, after all.

“You’ve been bad, and you must be punished.”

Closing his eyes, Neville waited for the first punishment. It wasn’t long in coming.

The flogger, he thought as it hit him. He arched into the stinging blows, gasping but otherwise not making a sound. The blows concentrated around his arse, each flick landing in a precise pattern. Just before the burning got too intense, it stopped, and Neville sighed as a cool hand was placed against his arse. The plug was turned, and Neville was unable to stop the moan that spilled from his throat.

“Silence!” The hand slap stung more than hurt. “Time for the clamps.”

Biting his lip, Neville trembled as fingers pinched his nipples and attached the dragon-shaped clamps. The pain almost immediately gave way to a steady throb that only seemed to make him harder.

“You like that.”

Neville knew better than to reply, plus, an answer really wasn’t required. Those tormenting fingers had now moved to his cock and were stroking up and down. “Yes, you definitely like that. We can’t have you coming too soon, though.”

The sudden constriction around the base of his prick wasn’t unexpected, yet Neville still closed his eyes. He truly wasn’t in control, his fate was in His hands. This was perfect.

Just then, he could hear the door to the room open and close, and another set of footsteps could be heard approaching. Neville’s eyes popped open. Oh, God--

“Ah, you made it,” He said. “I wasn’t sure if you would.”

Neville’s heart slowed once more. It wasn’t a member of the DA, it was someone else; someone He was expecting.

“I made it. Looks as if I missed some of the fun, though.” The new voice was smooth, cultured, and Neville shivered.

He chuckled. “Oh, I think Neville likes you.”

Neville flushed. This hadn’t ever happened before, but Neville couldn’t say it was unwelcome. Perhaps they would both-- His train of thought was interrupted.

“Get up and kneel on the bed.”

Neville stood, taking a second to get his balance before moving towards the bed. The plug made walking difficult, and he could only imagine the picture he made.

When he was finally on all fours, his head hanging down, Neville heard the others moving, and when hands came down to part his arse cheeks and fondle the plug, he whimpered.

“Did I tell you to make noise?” He asked. “I think we need to teach you some discipline by shutting you up.”

For a second, Neville wondered what that meant, until the prick nudging at his mouth made the answer clear. Neville automatically opened his mouth, and the cock slid in. Neville almost choked as it was shoved deep.

“That should keep you busy,” He said, his voice coming from behind Neville.

He twisted the plug, making Neville moan around the prick in his mouth.

Neville breathed through his nose as his mouth was thoroughly fucked. He was so focussed on relaxing his throat that it took him a second to realise that the plug was gone and was being replaced by-- Neville groaned.

They set a brutal pace; Neville was rocked back and forth by the force of their thrusts, and there was nothing he could do but relax and accept it, accept that things were beyond his hands, outside of his control.

“This...is...brilliant,” the owner of the cock in Neville’s mouth panted, speeding up.

“It is. Told you he was good,” He gasped. “Next time maybe we can both take him back here. I bet that would feel fantastic.”

At the thought of the two of them in his hole, Neville’s hands fisted in the sheets. If his cock hadn’t been restrained, he would have come, as it was his arse muscles spasmed, and He clasped Neville’s hips and shoved deep, spurting inside him.

The other was still pumping in his mouth, but the vibration of Neville’s moans finally became too much and he, too, came spilling down Neville’s throat. With a sigh, he pulled out.

“Do you want to come?” He asked, reaching around to tug hard on the nipple clamps.

“Please, please, please,” Neville was gasping now that his mouth wasn’t full and he could speak.

“Come, then. We’ve got you.”

The cockring was released at the same time as the clamps were, and it felt as if all the blood in Neville’s body immediately flowed to those three places. Arching his back and screaming, Neville came hard, the bright lights giving way to soothing darkness and, for a moment, peace as pleasure overwhelmed him.

~

When he woke, Neville was alone, sore, and satisfied. Sitting up, he smiled when he saw the vial of pain-relieving potion on the bedside table. “Thank you,” he said before downing it, his words echoing in the empty room. Immediately, his aches faded although his skin remained bruised. Just the way I like it.

Glancing at his watch, he realised he had very little time, so he Summoned his clothes and put them on. It was just in time, as, when he buttoned the last button on his robes, the door opened.

“Hey, Nev.”

Neville smiled. “Hey, Ginny.”

She approached, looking around. “I guess we can tell what you like to do in here, hm?” she said.

The room looked like a standard bedroom now, none of the erotic paraphernalia remaining. Neville blushed. “I like to rest. I guess I’m boring.”

She patted his shoulder. “You’re not. So, I’m your relief. You go on back to the dorms, and I’ll keep the room safe and open for us.”

Neville yawned. “Thanks, Ginny. Are you sure you don’t want company, though?”

Ginny shook her head, and, to his surprise, blushed. “Oh no. If I need company, the room can provide it.”

From the corner of his eye, Neville would have sworn he saw a figure solidify out of shadow, the soft light in the room glinting off his...glasses? Neville smiled. “Of course. Well, have a good night, Gin. I think Seamus is supposed to relieve you.”

She shrugged. “I told him I’d take a double shift, actually.”

Neville nodded, recognising the look in Ginny’s eyes. Apparently he wasn’t the only one the room provided for. “Goodnight, then,” he said, turning away.

Her soft voice drifted after him. “Oh, it will be.”

~



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[info]veridian_dair
2009-11-05 06:50 am UTC (link)
OMG...that was so mean because I'm being totally clueless and can't figure out who the two "?'s" are!!!!

Hopefully somebody (like yourself) will enlighten me?? *bats eyelashes*

(this was dang hot, btw...)

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-05 05:33 pm UTC (link)
*g*
It can be whoever you like. ;)
I had two specific people in mind as I was writing, but I decided it was more fun if the reader got to decide that for themselves. ;)

Thanks, hon! *g*

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[info]ldymusyc
2009-11-05 07:58 am UTC (link)
...

*cough*

AHUMINA.

That is all. ;D

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-05 05:36 pm UTC (link)
*glee*
Thank you!
That was just the reaction I was hoping for. :)

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[info]torino10154
2009-11-05 12:47 pm UTC (link)
Nnnggh! Oh, I really liked this. Very hot. No sure who you meant the two to be but I have a very pretty picture in my mind. :D Great job!

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-05 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, dear!
Ooh, who did YOU see with Neville here? I definitely had a pair in mind, but I decided it was more fun for the reader to decide for themselves. ;)

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[info]besamislabios
2009-11-05 01:47 pm UTC (link)
At the thought of the two of them in his hole, Neville’s hands fisted in the sheets. If his cock hadn’t been restrained, he would have come, as it was his arse muscles spasmed, and He clasped Neville’s hips and shoved deep, spurting inside him.

*dies*

Very, very hot! :D

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-05 05:38 pm UTC (link)
*glee*
Thank you! :)

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-11-05 02:35 pm UTC (link)
OMG, that was the hottest. Fabulous work!

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-05 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Hehe. Neville needs to let go, too, sometimes. *pets him*
Thanks, Melody!

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[info]hogwartshoney
2009-11-05 05:45 pm UTC (link)
Ohhhhhhhhh, Ali. Jesus..... ! I like that we don't know who the two men are, even though there are clues, and we think we might know, but we're still not sure. Then, well, if his every wish was granted by the Room, I'd vote for Charlie and Draaaaaaaaaco. Oooooooooie!

Can I also simply ADORE the Ginny/Harry thing too, while not supporting that ship at all, but ADORING that the Room would ... provide for its occupants?

Loves it loves it lovessss it!

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:22 am UTC (link)
*g8
Yes, I thought people would like slipping whoever they like in there with Neville. ;)
And thanks for noticing the tiny Harry/Ginny (although it would prolly be Ginny/Harry, knowing her). *g*
Thanks, hon!

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[info]lulabelle72
2009-11-05 08:08 pm UTC (link)
I read Snape and Lucius in the room with Neville, but whoever was in there with him... *guh*

Um, yes, that was lovely, thank you very much.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:25 am UTC (link)
I am loving all this speculation! So far, a lot of the ideas are very delicious. (Snucius=yum!)
This is fun!

Thank you! :)

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[info]inamac
2009-11-05 08:23 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I was hoping someone would chose the clamps kink - and it was you. squeee!

Little dragons? Is that a clue? And a healing potion to follow? Hmmm. Well, I know who I want it to be, but this was so cleverly written that I can keep my illusions.

Dear Neville, such a perfect bottom...

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:31 am UTC (link)
Hehehe. Yes, I liked the idea of clamps and then Neville seemed to be begging for a little attention, so... ;)

Little dragons
Good eye there! *g* I would love for you to tell me who you see in this. ;)

Thanks, dear!

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[info]inamac
2009-11-06 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Weeeeell... Severus (obviously), and I suspect that the dragon clamps were a gift from Lucius (who at this point has other concerns than those of school governor) to Draco...

And no, I do not have time to write that fic.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:43 pm UTC (link)
You sure? Seems to me as if you've already plotted it. ;)
Just saying. *g*

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[info]mindabbles
2009-11-05 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Guh, so hot!! I love that we don't know--or can imagine (fantasize) who might have been there with Neville. Not only was this hot, you showed Neville's need not to be the one in charge beautifully.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:33 am UTC (link)
Thank you!
Yes, I can see Neville being responsible his 7th year, keeping the DA alive for when it's needed, but every now again even the bravest Gryffindor needs to give up control. :)

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[info]littleroo27
2009-11-06 12:20 am UTC (link)
wow, so yummy! I for sure saw Snape as #1 man, and I'm thinking Draco for the other, because Lucius is just a bastard, and Draco still has a tiny ounce of innocence left in him... or maybe just cuz it's pervy hot with the three of them *grins*

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:34 am UTC (link)
Hehehe.
I just love all this speculation! *dances*
The beauty of this? It can be whoever you want it to be. *g*

Thanks so much!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-11-06 12:43 am UTC (link)
Mmmmmm, delicious. I pictured Bill as man #1, and then the second one pinged me as Lucius, although that's about as unlikely of a combination as you'll ever see, LOL.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-06 01:37 am UTC (link)
Ahahaha! Yeah, I don't think I've ever seen that combo, not that they wouldn't be yummy... *g*
Thanks, my dear!

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[info]hpuckle
2009-11-06 03:35 pm UTC (link)
I pictured Bill, of course, because I can't look at your username and NOT think of Bill/Neville lol and then... who would follow Bill but Charlie?

YUMMY!

xxx

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Mmm, that would be a luscious threesome. *goes to happy place*
Thanks, hon! :)

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[info]sillypowers
2009-11-06 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Nice! I like the way you let us use our imagination. Good for Neville, getting what he needs. And good for Ginny, too! Isn't it nice to make these characters happy?

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[info]sillypowers
2009-11-06 07:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hey Alisanne!!! didn't even know it was you. I just found this page, and there you were. yay!!!

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:39 pm UTC (link)
*g*
Yup, it's me being deviant. ;)

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:38 pm UTC (link)
Hehehe. Yes, it is nice to have some things left to the imagination, innit? ;)

Thank you!

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[info]leela_cat
2009-11-07 06:03 pm UTC (link)
This story is seriously hot. My imagination ran free, coming up with several possible scenarios, especially with that voice. Wonderful.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:40 pm UTC (link)
And see? The fun that is everyone gets to see whomever they prefer as Neville's partners. ;)

Thanks, dear! Glad you liked it!

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[info]zephre
2009-11-07 06:55 pm UTC (link)
awesome- the Room of Requirement is the best kink evar. :D
this was so great. guh.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-07 08:42 pm UTC (link)
Hee!
Thanks, hon!
Yeah, I LOVE the RoR. Handy place, that. ;)

Glad you liked it!

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[info]angela_snape
2009-11-07 11:15 pm UTC (link)
Hmm... trying to figure out who you had in mind when you wrote. I'm leaning towards Draco (for the second one), but not sure about the first... maybe someone older, like Snape. *ponders*

Whoever they are, this was an excellent read.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-08 02:48 pm UTC (link)
*g*
Thanks, darling!
I will admit that I had Draco in mind for one of them, but so far, no one has got the other person I was thinking. ;)
But hey, I that's why I left it deliberately vague. Hee!

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[info]harco_potfoy
2009-11-08 08:26 am UTC (link)
Ohhh, such a naughty room;)

I'm thinking one is Charlie and the other is someone else equally as sexy. Loved that Nev wasn't allowed to make any noise.

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-08 02:51 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm, very handy Room, innit? I think JK had no clue how much use fanfic writers would make of it. ;)

Charlie seems like a pretty popular participant. ;)

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. *g*

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[info]dumbledoreswang
2009-11-09 10:37 pm UTC (link)
*struggles to breathe*
*falls out of chair*
*lifts self back to keyboard*
*fans self*

That was hot! I never really thought about the RoR during their 7th year. I need a room like that here. It'd be awesome and I know I would have a hard time going to class...

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-11 01:20 am UTC (link)
Hee! *helps you into chair*
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

Mmmm, it's a handy room, although I think there would be a danger of it being a bit too distracting in RL. *g* Still they are fighting a war, so they really need this escape. *pets them*

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[info]misconstrue
2009-11-12 01:07 am UTC (link)
Why did it never occur to me that the room would provide in other ways? Very creative and very well done! Great fantasy, great details. We know what Ginny wants, but what about Luna??

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[info]alisanne
2009-11-12 06:14 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much!
I do love that Room of Requirement (very handy for writers). *g*
And I think all Luna wanted that night was comfort (books, Kneazle in her lap...)
Glad you enjoyed it!

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