Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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30th May 2008 10:22
*Gush* *Burble*
There was so much I enjoyed with this fic, I don't know where to start (threatened to make certificates, *snurk*). I loved all the desperately matey cover-up that Harry was doing; that felt SO right. I particularly liked all the non-verbal business of the boys in the group. I could just feel that half-pushy blokeyness: I really got the feeling that Harry felt he was somehow being pushed into something dangerous. And "possibly phwoaar" was one of those lines that makes you laugh, and then think. Extra good.

There's just one little thing though: rather than "free reign" I believe it should be "free rein" (from horse-riding, cf. "loose rein".) Although I guess you could make the case there are queens involved...

Thanks for posting this.
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