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New Moon: An AU Twilight Game.

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 01:34:53 GMT

I'm looking for critique on the entire game from ad to premise to cast page. Let (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 17:09:53 GMT

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Hawley State Lunatic Asylum : A town & psych ward-centric RPG (LJ)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 17:21:36 GMT

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The Risen: A Dark AU Post!DH Game

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 09:35:07 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 00:21:34 GMT

I'm something of a newb when it comes to coding, and my knockoff PS program isn' (Read more ...)

Triwiz

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sat, 19 Sep 2009 09:38:11 GMT

Hi, we've got a newly finished game that we would love critiqued so we can fix e (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 18:24:19 GMT

Mainly I would really like setting, premise and potential gameplay critique. If (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sat, 05 Sep 2009 18:44:52 GMT

Hi! We'd like some feedback on our community as a whole (not just the graphics). (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sat, 05 Sep 2009 01:40:01 GMT

Hi, I would appreciate some critical feedback on our multi-fandom city game, Pan (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 05:26:58 GMT

We have done a complete overhaul on the advert, and left in-depth review for thr (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 23 Aug 2009 13:58:35 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 16 Aug 2009 19:02:16 GMT

Brand new comm for you all to look over! :D

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Brand new comm for you all to look over! :D

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Castalian Springs

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 16 Aug 2009 05:19:09 GMT

A boarding school RPG with a literary twist.

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<center><i>A boarding school RPG with a literary twist.</i>

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RP: Tumultus Strain; Canon-Compliant set in 2006

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 02:11:12 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 19:25:56 GMT

Hi everyone! charing_cross is a sort of unique game where each month (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Wed, 05 Aug 2009 01:03:53 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Mon, 03 Aug 2009 17:11:36 GMT

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Akedia: A dark supernatural RP

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Fri, 31 Jul 2009 01:14:05 GMT

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quick question

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Thu, 30 Jul 2009 15:48:57 GMT

So I don't have an ad to post (well, I do, but that's not why I'm here) but I ha (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Thu, 30 Jul 2009 04:22:21 GMT

Hi, a friend pointed me in the direction of this community. I haven't actually g (Read more ...)

Neopolis Academy: Freeze-rays and monsters and magic and superpowers, oh my!

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 05:39:20 GMT

Despite being open for six months, we've never actually advertised ourselves bef (Read more ...)

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Sun, 12 Jul 2009 17:35:44 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 03:59:00 GMT

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Infernous Nova: The Next Generation.

roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Tue, 07 Jul 2009 18:38:19 GMT

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roleplaytutorials@gmail.com — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 17:41:20 GMT

Any critiques, comments, suggestions, advice, etc. on the game or advert are wel (Read more ...)