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New Moon: An AU Twilight Game.

2009-11-27T01:34:53Z

I'm looking for critique on the entire game from ad to premise to cast page. Let (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-11-17T11:09:00

2009-11-17T17:09:53Z

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Hawley State Lunatic Asylum : A town & psych ward-centric RPG (LJ)

2009-10-11T17:21:36Z

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The Risen: A Dark AU Post!DH Game

2009-10-07T09:35:07Z

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critiqued @ 2009-10-04T17:14:00

2009-10-05T00:21:34Z

I'm something of a newb when it comes to coding, and my knockoff PS program isn' (Read more ...)

Triwiz

2009-09-19T09:38:11Z

Hi, we've got a newly finished game that we would love critiqued so we can fix e (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-09-10T11:18:00

2009-09-10T18:24:19Z

Mainly I would really like setting, premise and potential gameplay critique. If (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-09-05T14:42:00

2009-09-05T18:44:52Z

Hi! We'd like some feedback on our community as a whole (not just the graphics). (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-09-04T21:24:00

2009-09-05T01:40:01Z

Hi, I would appreciate some critical feedback on our multi-fandom city game, Pan (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-08-29T22:16:00

2009-08-30T05:26:58Z

We have done a complete overhaul on the advert, and left in-depth review for thr (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-08-23T09:00:00

2009-08-23T13:58:35Z

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critiqued @ 2009-08-16T20:02:00

2009-08-16T19:02:16Z

Brand new comm for you all to look over! :D

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Brand new comm for you all to look over! :D

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Castalian Springs

2009-08-16T05:19:09Z

A boarding school RPG with a literary twist.

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<center><i>A boarding school RPG with a literary twist.</i>

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RP: Tumultus Strain; Canon-Compliant set in 2006

2009-08-15T02:11:12Z

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September Advertisments

2009-08-13T19:25:56Z

Hi everyone! charing_cross is a sort of unique game where each month (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-08-04T20:59:00

2009-08-05T01:03:53Z

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critiqued @ 2009-08-03T18:10:00

2009-08-03T17:11:36Z

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Akedia: A dark supernatural RP

2009-07-31T01:14:05Z

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quick question

2009-07-30T15:48:57Z

So I don't have an ad to post (well, I do, but that's not why I'm here) but I ha (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-07-29T23:19:00

2009-07-30T04:22:21Z

Hi, a friend pointed me in the direction of this community. I haven't actually g (Read more ...)

Neopolis Academy: Freeze-rays and monsters and magic and superpowers, oh my!

2009-07-29T05:39:20Z

Despite being open for six months, we've never actually advertised ourselves bef (Read more ...)

critiqued @ 2009-07-12T18:34:00

2009-07-12T17:35:44Z

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critiqued @ 2009-07-10T13:58:00

2009-07-10T03:59:00Z

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Infernous Nova: The Next Generation.

2009-07-07T18:38:19Z

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critiqued @ 2009-07-03T19:38:00

2009-07-03T17:41:20Z

Any critiques, comments, suggestions, advice, etc. on the game or advert are wel (Read more ...)