Ally Halliwell (![[info]](http://www.insanejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} allyischarmed) wrote in ![[info]](http://www.insanejournal.com/img/community.gif){kind=small} charmed_progeny, |
Re: phoebe and coop's middle daughter app
trust me, no harm done. after all, what kind of a writer would i be if i didn't take any criticism? would you like me to resubmit the application or just post the corrections? and also, the third person sample was from an actual RP thread, some of it was mine while others were from other writers. in order to give you a good grip on how i actually write in third person i would have to write something on the spot, most of my writings are first person lol. thank you for your consideration and i will try to resubmit by tomorrow.
trust me, no harm done. after all, what kind of a writer would i be if i didn't take any criticism? would you like me to resubmit the application or just post the corrections? and also, the third person sample was from an actual RP thread, some of it was mine while others were from other writers. in order to give you a good grip on how i actually write in third person i would have to write something on the spot, most of my writings are first person lol. thank you for your consideration and i will try to resubmit by tomorrow.