Sorry for the harsh comment
Well....I don't know how to put this, and I hate leaving comments like this, but... I couldn't like this story. Don't be offended, your language,way of description,dialogs- everything impressed me, and I loved the ending too. But the whole thing of Dante being the type of "shallow" guy who would run/stay away from steady relationships and always go for casual sex with prostitutes/slutty nameless women (okay,that wasn't in your fic, but similar things were) angers me. I've read that in too many stories and the idea has started boring me(I never liked the idea much anyway). Seriously, does anyone ever consider the chance that Dante might be a decent guy with some taste when it comes to sex and relationships? Are there some kind of unwritten rule that all men with tough jobs MUST be so shallow?
Please, don't be offended. I wasn't trying to insult you or anything. I am merely stating the fact that I don't like this story because I disagree with your views. This IS a well-written story and it is my problem that I am unable to like it.