Zanne Chaos (emilie_burns) wrote in chaotic_library, @ 2007-06-08 20:50:00 |
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Zanne's Fic Comments - Backup 4
Oh Zanne!
*smooshy squeeful hugs*
It's BEAUTIFUL, and just perfect! It's most definitely very SnL; you hit the nail on the head.
Thank you so much, truly. It means a lot that you felt inspired to step outside your usual comfort zone to create this for me.
♥ ♥ ♥
Who knows?
Maybe you'll cross over into the realm of writing actual full length SnL fic! ;)
I adore you, seriously. I mean, Lodoss fic. Good Lodoss fic! *blubbers*
I love how you put emphasis on how Ashram refuses to let his guard down, to really let himself love her, but still pry into his head and pick out his respect for her. And the focus on her loyalty - so great! I love Ashram and Pirotess, and you really did them justice. I saw you had this claim when I was looking through the claims, and I was waiting for you to do it!
*_* Thank you, that was hot.
I'm particularly fond of the distinction between Riza and Lieutenant Hawkeye, because that's something that so often stands in military smutfic, and it's nice to see it... challenged, to say the least. ♥