Oh man, I'm glad you two decided to continue this! I can't wait to find out about Snape in the next part (since I see above you're planning a next part *thankgod*)
Harry's so presh, with his 'subtle' worries about Draco leaving him for Snape, even after Draco said he wanted to move in with him. He's trying so hard not to admit he's falling for Draco, poor thing.
And mmm, mmm, yummy smut. Love Harry's first time bottoming and all the dirty talk. ;)