*vbeg* Um, I don't know how I do it? Because sometimes I write things that I think are kind of "eh" and get a ton of squee, and sometimes I think a scene is scorching and no one else seems to agree. But I'm very happy you liked it!
"Come for me" can certainly be overdone (and yeah, I've used it more than once in various fics) but glad to know it worked here.
It's Friday, don't bother trying to concentrate! Hee.