I just read that WAAAAY too fast, and am incoherent, and now must go back and savour it more before rational and non-keyboardsmashy comments will be happening. AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH.
As much as I love the story as a whole, get my handbasket ready, because it's the Remus/Teddy parts that just make me flail like a flaily thing. a;lksdgj.