She reached out for the doorknob, but found that she couldn't reach it. Odd, it didn't look like it was that far away.
I laughed out loud when I realized she was unable to open the door! Oh, MAN! And I loved all that about her relationship with Lupin - you handled it well, and Fleur is the perfect candidate for knowing a thing or two about love.
And the sex! Yummy! So much attention between the two ladies, and it's so hot! I never thought I would like reading about F/F oral sex, but the way Fleur has such a good time with it, I couldn't help myself ^_^.
This was very enjoyable, and well written! I liked the plotty bits, the working with canon, and the hot smexy threesome too! Nice!!!