Bill who hugged too long? LOL I can so see that. Sirius seducing her with his smokey eyes, very nice. OR was he just giving her to look of "stay away from Remus he's mine." But well she knows he's gay. What about the debreifing with Snape? No action for her there?
Really the whole thing was brilliant. I loved Viktor's awkwardness and her taking charge. It was sooo very hot *fans self*. I love her internal dialog, especially about Charlie Weasley it made me laugh so hard. GREAT WORK!!!!