Had me laughing and panting at the same time. Incredibly hot and very entertaining.

I loved this: His mind would drift for a split-second, long enough for a snapshot image to form. Then Brian's mouth would find his neck, or his teeth would find his lower lip, and the particular view of the drain in the middle of the floor as seen from upside down, would fade to black, streaked through with color, behind his eyelids.

And the whole crooked coffee table thing just cracked me up. I am very glad you forced the issue and wrote this. It was fun and so v.v. hot!

~Ellen